Home work (week 7)

Today like every other day my class and I have home work. Today for writing I chose to do The Tunnel from pobble. Here it is. Here is a link if you want to pobble if you want to go on it. Pobble

My buddy from Grey main school (Simon)

Hello there Simon my name is Giselle Tumai - Ridland and your my student buddy and I would like to tell you a little bit about me and would also like to give you some advice about your blog posts.

So you now know my name so lets tell you a little bit more. I am Maori, Cook island, and an inch of European. I am a 12 year old, year 8 student that go's to Glen Taylor School. You can go to my All About me if you want to know more.
Lets talk about your blog. I like your blog but you should consider posting more and using Capital letters and punctuation. You should also consider showing an individual photo of you or post an ALL ABOUT ME of yourself on your blog. I hope I have given you some good advice, and I hope to see more posts on your blog.